Thank you for reading my stories. Below I have posted chapter 1 of a story I wrote back in 2015. Like the first 2 stories I posted, this one features Justin Macdonald and his friends, only this time he is at home in Port Salser Ontario (fictitious place).
I liked the title and I hope the story lives up to the title. Please comment if you liked the chapter, or even if you hated it! I can take the criticism.
Anyway, let's get to it, shall we... introducing... Night Of The Zombie:
Night Of The Zombie
Chapter 1
A cold wind swept up the darkened street, dry brown leaves
hurrying past as if running from an unseen enemy. Trees swayed precariously in
the wind. Rain started to fall , first a mist then a more torrential downpour.
The hooded figure stood in the middle of the road, his cape flapping behind
him…
The dude has a cape? I asked turning to my friend,
movie director Zach Bristow. He was three years older than my 17 years and had
recently moved to L.A. to start a career in making movies. He was originally
from Port Salser and was back in town to direct his first full length film.
He was tall and slim,
and had long dark hair pulled back in a ponytail. He sported a neatly trimmed
beard as well . Behind a pair of dark-framed glasses, his hazel eyes danced with
excitement as he turned to me .
Justin, buddy, he said,
putting a hand on my shoulder. You gotta set the atmosphere. Capes are cool
and—well, mysterious, he added
getting a far off look in his eyes.
They’re cliché, I said
with a roll of my eyes.
I’m going to ignore that
last comment, he muttered. You’re not getting the vision, my friend. Movies are
all about creating an illusion.
I am getting a vision
and it’s of a corn field waving in the breeze, as in, this is a corny idea.
Zach pretended to look
hurt, but I knew he really wasn’t. He didn’t let too much faze him. His last
short movie that he co -wrote and directed back in L.A. was universally panned
by the critics but it hadn’t bothered him. He just jumped right into his next
project.
“Night Of The Zombie”
was the tentative title of his new flick. He knew of my interest in moviemaking and asked me to help him with this one. I was going to be an extra and
would get to be made up as a zombie. I was excited to be doing that, and I was
helping out Zach. His parents lived just down the street from me in Port
Salser, and I had always idolized Zach growing up and always thought he was
cool, with his homemade movies and stories that he wrote.
He had decided to come
back to Port Salser to give some of the locals a taste of filmmaking. He was
doing the location shoot here then return to L.A. for the interior shots. He
needed a lot of extras for his zombie scenes and wanted them to come from local
people. My buddies Van Gilman and Raj Mistry were going to be extras as well as
me.
Many people were excited
about this movie, but some of the townspeople were less than enthusiastic.
Really, I couldn’t see why. Zombies weren’t everybody’s thing but they were hot
right now and this film would certainly bring publicity to the town. I guess
some people are just sticks in the mud.
Ok, so I’ll ditch the
cape, he said, scribbling that part out.
You wanted my honest
opinion, right? I said, taking the corrected page back from him.
Is something bothering
you? I asked. He wasn’t normally bothered by criticism but it felt like he was
annoyed at me for making the suggestion about the cape.
It’s nothing, he said,
finally looking up.
Zach, you know Dad’s a
private investigator. I’ve learned everything I know from him. I know how to
read people. Something’s bothering you. Spill it.
He looked up at me and
chuckled. He laid the pages down on the floor and sat up. Can’t keep anything
from you, I can see, he said. Look. It may be nothing, but I got this weird
note in my mail.
He got up and went to
his massive desk and opened the drawer. I stood behind his chair as he opened
up the folded piece of paper. It had an animated picture of a zombie spewing
out blood. Oddly enough that wasn’t the scary part of the note. There was another
picture. A tombstone. On it was written Zach’s name with his birth year and the
current year etched on it. It was not an animated picture but looked like an
actual tombstone.
Below was a message
scrawled in red lettering.
Or you will die!”
Um—ok, I said. That’s
just a little creepy, and Zach just nodded. I suppose you checked where it came
from.
He turned to me . What do
you think? Of course I checked. There was no name on the note. It was just in my
mailbox downstairs.
I even went to the
police with this last night, he went on. They’re looking into it, but they said
it was just a harmless prank.
I’ll have a talk with
them if you want, I said.
No! he blurted, getting
up from his chair. I don’t want you getting involved. I know about your history
with solving mysteries, but I can handle this. It’s not serious. Just some
jokers out to rattle my cage.
Okay, I said putting my
hands up in surrender.
Sorry, he said,
scratching his whiskers and sighing. I didn’t mean to snap. You can investigate
if you want . I just —.
That’s OK, I said. But I
don’t agree with your or the police. I don’t think this is a harmless prank. We
need to find out who gave this to you.
Just so you know, I’m
not backing down. I’ve invested too much in this project to just give up. This
movie will really help this town. If someone isn’t into zombies, tough. The
genre has come a long way in the last 20-30 years. It’s almost an art form.
I nodded in agreement.
Well once I have my makeup on we’ll see how much of an art form it is.
Speaking of makeup, I
don’t think Mandy will have to do too much on your mask. You’ve been looking
pretty zombie-like lately, dude.
Thanks, I said. You’re a
real pal.
My cell phone rang and I
answered. A loud voice squawked over the receiver, an excited voice. It sounded
like my buddy Van.
Slow down, what’s up? I
said
Justin, you have to get
down here. Something’s happened.
Where are you? I asked.
At the movie set. Corner
of Main and Pine St. That's where the make-up tent is — well what’s left of it.
I’ll be right there.
Zach’s phone buzzed and
he answered as I pulled on my high-tops and headed to the door.
What! Zach blurted. Be
right there!
He followed me to the
door and pulled on his flip flops . Something’s happened downtown, he said. At
the movie set. Is that what Van called about?
Yeah, I said grimly.
Come on, we’ll take my SUV.
We went out to the
street and got in my blue SUV. I pulled away from the curb and headed downtown.
A fire truck approached
us from behind on Main St and I pulled over to let it pass. This isn’t a good
sign, Zach muttered.
Van said something about
the make-up tent. He wouldn’t elaborate but it sounded serious.
We continued downtown
and as we got nearer we could see smoke rising above some of the buildings. Not
a good sign, at all, Zach repeated.
The movie company had
set up a number of tents along Main St
in the downtown core of Port Salser, as this is where some of the
filming was to take place later today. The “tent city” could be moved around to
the various filming locations as needed.
I parked in a city
parking lot as close to the sets as I could and we got out and I locked up the
SUV. My buddy Van and Raj came over to us at that moment, Van looking like a
zombie with bloodshot eyes and cuts on his cheek. Tattered clothing completed
the look.
Say, that's an
improvement, I said, unable to resist despite the situation. Van just rolled
his eye. He would get me back later.
My other buddy, Raj
Mistry was not in make-up yet, his dark brown hair and brown skin glistened
with sweat. He was dressed similarly to Zach in t -shirt, cut-offs and flip
flops . He, being my hip, cool friend, also sported a neatly trimmed moustache.
It was unseasonably hot
for June and Van's make-up was already showing signs of “melting” in the heat.
What's happened, Zach
asked, following Raj back down the street to the make-up tent. I brought up the
rear with Van in tow.
Tent's on fire, Raj
reported, turning back to me as we walked quickly along the street. About a
block away the fire truck that had passed us earlier was parked along Main St,
it's hoses trained on a large canvas tent that was engulfed in flames!
Police and firemen had
cordoned off the area and had put up barricades. Zach tried to jump one of them
but was stopped by a police officer. It was actually someone I knew, Officer
Paul Canning of the local Port Salser Police.
Whoa there, son , Paul
said, waving him back. Stay back! Paul noticed me at that moment. Justin,
figured I would see you here sooner or later .
What's happened—besides
the obvious, I muttered glancing at the tent in flames. The fire was almost
out, smoke and soot were still billowing into the sky.
We got a call from the
movie people that the make-up tent was on fire. They fire marshal is launching
an investigation as soon as the flames are out—which should be any minute.
Listen, stay back and out of the way, he added gruffly. He turned away and
headed back to his cruiser.
What's got into him? Van
muttered. He's usually so happy go lucky .
I don't know, I said,
lost in thought. Canning and I usually joked around, he knew my reputation as
being an amateur detective in town and didn't usually mind my poking around,
but he seemed unusually gruff today.
We watched in silence as
the firemen battled the final few flames. Once the fire was out, the hoses were
retracted and the fire trucks left the scene. The fire marshal, Bryan Mackenzie
stayed behind with two of his investigators, I didn't recognize them—and was
talking to Canning. They came over to where I was standing with Van Raj and
Zach.
Mr. Bristow, Mackenzie
said, extending his hand to Zach, who shook it. I'm Bryan Mackenzie , fire
marshal. Can we have a few words?
Zach nodded. Can Justin
come with us?
Canning went to shake
his head but Mackenzie looked at me with his hard grey eyes and relented. He
was about 6'4” with his blond hair in a buzz cut and was clean shaven. Very
well , he said. Come with me.
I followed Zach,
Mackenzie and a scowling Canning to the fire truck that had remained on the scene.
Mackenzie pulled a large metal clipboard from the truck and headed over to the
smoldering tent. Without getting too close he stopped at an area at the base of
the tent around the back of it . You're in charge of this shoot, are you?
Mackenzie said turning to Zach.
I'm the director, Zach
said, voice trembling. But I have a production manager, Lee—Lee Landers . He's
in c-charge of facilities and—well stuff like that, Zach remarked with a
nervous grin.
Mackenzie nodded. Very
well , he said. He pointed to the base of the tent and we noticed something that
should not have been there.
It's pretty crude,
Mackenzie said. But it looks like someone started this fire on purpose. The
object we were looking at was a cigarette lighter!
Whoa! Zach blurted,
rubbing his face in frustration. Mackenzie picked up the lighter with gloved
hands and put it in an evidence bag.
Sir! A voice called out
behind us. A young firefighter who had remained behind with Mackenzie's team
was holding up another object. A small gas can. He brought it over to where
Mackenzie was standing.
Where did you find it,
Robbie?
In a garbage bin near
the entrance to the tent, Robbie replied. He was a tall dark haired young man,
barely out of his teens. I didn't recognize him so he must have originally been
from out of town.
Mackenzie turned to
Zach. Seems you or someone on your crew has an enemy, he remarked. This fire
was set on purpose.
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